1.
What
did you do well?
Base on your
comments, I think I did well on organization and explanation. Also, each
paragraph of my essay relate and/or prove my thesis statement.
2.
What
do you need to work on?
I think my essay needs: more
explanations or details; avoiding to repeat ideas or sentences; working on MLA
style; grammar.
3.
How
you will use this knowledge to strengthen future essays?
In the future
essays, I know what I need to work on, and I will spend more time on them.
Also, I know that I may not fix all of them, but I will try my best to do it.
4.
What
grade would you have given yourself?
Actually, I was
so surprised that I got an A-. Initially, I think my essay would get a grade
around B, even I did everything I can do to improve my essay.
5.
What
questions do you have?
So far, I don't
have any questions about this essay.
Well, I thought your essay was really good. You do need to continue working on grammar and stuff like that, but I think you have the right attitude--you're not always going to be able to fix everything, but that shouldn't stop you from working hard on a paper.
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